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I’ll slit your wrist, if you slit mine//
Let our blood drip and let it combine//
Now people will know, this is a sign//
To tell everyone that we’re not really fine//

We have each other, but we seem to be alone//
Invisible to the eye, and to the mouth unknown//
We’re not really different, everyone’s a clone//
We’ll just have to make it all on our own//

We’re alone now but there will be plenty in hell//
Plenty more who gave up and fell//
We won’t be the only ones to dwell//
And to welcome the day we say farewell//

So here’s the knife, put it to good use//
Cut for me, I can handle the abuse//
Sink it in and let the blood run loose//
Just do it, there’s really no excuse//

We will die together, I’ll take you with me//
It’s the only choice we have to finally be free//
I know it won’t work to run away or flee//
Do this and the world will finally let us be//

Now all our screams that everyone ignores//
Will be heard so well they’ll break down doors//
Just one more cut and we’ll hit the floors//
So you slit my wrist, and I’ll slit yours//
©2006-2009 ~XoShadyBaby22oX
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:

Author's Comments

not the best title...but i was talkin 2 my 1 friend about how much i hate skewl and shit...and she said "can i die now?" so i said "ill slit ur wrist if u slit mine" then i got inspired

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:iconlordbeazy:
Yes, its well expressed and worked out with some skill, but Im getting a bit tired of the same old theme, I had hopes you were breaking away. Just being honest. :rose:

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The most successful serial killer of all time, is time itself.
Just thought I’d depress you. :D
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
honesty accepted

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconbandgeek4life:
I feel this way a lot lately. :( It's sad, I know, but eventully life should get better.

nice poem, btw. :+fav:

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hi! I'm bored
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
awww thanks...and thx for the fav...i think alot of ppl feel like this...i cant give u much advise if were both lost in this sucky world

hope things get better<3

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconbandgeek4life:
you 2.

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hi! I'm bored
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
thanks

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconbandgeek4life:
ur welcome.

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hi! I'm bored
:iconbloodyteardrop08:
Morbid but I really love the rhyming as well a the writing. :clap:

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*I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions.*

*Behind this mask is an idea... And ideas are bulletproof.*

*We are the music makers and we are the dreamers of dreams.*
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
gracias<333

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconbloodyteardrop08:
ben nada (sp).

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*I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions.*

*Behind this mask is an idea... And ideas are bulletproof.*

*We are the music makers and we are the dreamers of dreams.*

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