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The tears that I cry; they run down my cheeks//
The tears drop down like a pipe with a leak//
The tears that cloud my eyes with black//
The tears, they die; they burn and crack//
The tears that swell when times are blue//
But do these tears mean anything to you? //

The blood that drips from my fragile wrists//
The blood pours out when I clench my fist//
The blood that stains my sleeves with red//
The blood, from veins, it now has fled//
The blood that sheds when I can’t renew//
But does this blood mean anything to you? //

The scars that imprint; they show my pain//
The scars remind me to carry this chain//
The scars that lay deep within my heart//
The scars, they stay, ‘til death do us part//
The scars that shine when troubles pursue//
But do these scars mean anything to you? //

The tears, the blood, the scars, and me//
I’m trapped in this world; I can’t be free//
You see the tears run down my cheeks//
You see the blood that flows like creaks//
You see the scars; you can see right through//
But do these things mean anything to you? //
©2006-2009 ~XoShadyBaby22oX
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hmmmm....im actually not sure what to say.......

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:iconlordbeazy:
First I must say that you nagged me for repeating words, but here you went ballistic with repeats. Its ok, its part of the structure, I know that.
This improved as it went on. I didn't much like the frst stanza, but then it got better with each one. The last stanza tied it all up and was great. :clap:

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Those who are good at liberating people, are also good at enslaving them. Plato.
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
yea, mine was part of the structure, yours was not that structured in the first place<3
well thanks...i had writers block with the 1st stanza then the rest just came

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconlordbeazy:
argue, argue - wot a bitch! - not you! Life haha.

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Those who are good at liberating people, are also good at enslaving them. Plato.
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
gracias

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
i bet, i bet

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconduckies325:
I like it...a lot!!!!!!

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We are the puzzle pieces of life, we need each other to be complete, to live.
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
gracias

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconbloodyteardrop08:
Very good! I like it. :D

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*I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions.*

*Behind this mask is an idea... And ideas are bulletproof.*

*We are the music makers and we are the dreamers of dreams.*

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